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RP Comic - Page 18

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RP Page 18! yes I know it sucks. The next one I do will be more realistic/detailed c:

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

It was very nice, perhaps a bit cut off from the last comic that continued from when he got bit by the badger. Of course, Red doesn't have any horns. Was there a reason why? I think the comic would run smoother if she had horns.
The fifth comic of the three other cats with the pink background was nice, though I thought the other red character, not Red, whatever his name is, was male.
And the last comic where they all look . . . odd, I thought it was a bit confusing. Is that what they actually look like? Or was he just having hallucinations?
Also, I mostly scribbled around this critique so I don't feel that strongly to what I've said, though other people might feel the same way.
I REALLY like the comic. A lot. Good job :3